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    Unhappy untitled (A poem for my sick friend)

    ...untitled....

    If there was one thing,
    in this world I could do,
    for anyone person,
    especially you my friend.
    I'd trade you my health,
    for your sickness,
    so that you could live a good life,
    and mine not change.
    If I got sick,
    so the heck what.
    wouldn't change my life,
    or what I do.
    I'd give you my years of life,
    so a joyous one you'd lead,
    believe me if I could,
    i would like to for you friend.
    your all i have girl,
    i want you to know.
    think of me when your down,
    and how much i care for you.
    imagine what i'd do for love,
    how i might be.
    we are truely friends,
    and that's all we can be.
    i care about my friends,
    i'd stop at nothing.
    i'd die for them if I could,
    nothing would take them from me.
    I give you my strength and heart,
    everything deep in me.
    And i wish that i could,
    but i cannot.
    I give my talents and goals,
    my writing and drawings.
    i'd give you it all,
    and lose the gift,
    that that you would never pain,
    and never again be sick.
    then somewhere along the lines,
    i'd find MY true love.
    i'd work the rest of my life,
    and give her what couldn't didn't give you.
    get better soon,
    my friend far away.
    i may be just another guy now,
    but i hope to you best friend some day..........


    By Justin McCormick

    To my sick friend::: Today I am not K' Heart... I am Your friend Justin. I will always be your friend for as long as you allow me to be. I don't have many friends, but even the one's that i rarely speak to, i care about. i wish the fastest recovery that God can give you. may you never hurt another day. please, get better soon. if you need to talk or anything else, remember... i'm here for you. I'm not too sure what a friend would do... but that's what i would do. i'd be here for you, whenever i could. get well soon.

    You Friend... Justin McCormick

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    wow. very nice and emotinally driven writing here....hope your pal gets better!

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    nice. very emotional. hope your friend gets better. great poem.

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    hey..who's it for? well yeah its really nice..your too kind
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    Thanks justin..you know whats funny? a day after you wrote this I started to get better!
    I'm on my way to recovery now! YAY! and you are one of my best buds..even online.
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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