That is awsomely funny!! complements to the poet. But are potty jokes really funny?
Yes. Potty jokes are funny.So this is an awsome poem. AND IT RHYMES!!!
I know that in my heart.....
I SERIOUSLY NEEDA FART!
I need to spill the beans...
uh oh...it sorta got in my jeans XD
Darn I wish I could hold the gun
Cuz im sweatin IN THE SUN
Eww...its getting super sticky
In my pants, im feeling really icky
Man my pants just really smell
Ill just stay away...no one can tell
between nature and its air
Today turned out to be my worst nightmare!
When will this day be done?
Wish I could speed up the sun
But I was actually figured out outside
was very humiliating and plunged my pride
Now i look back on it and start to cry
I'll laugh on that event until i die
By Christopher Nguyen.
PS: This didnt really happen XD...but its funny though..![]()
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That is awsomely funny!! complements to the poet. But are potty jokes really funny?
Yes. Potty jokes are funny.So this is an awsome poem. AND IT RHYMES!!!
haha..yes it does..and im proud of it...XD....i laughed hard writing it...Originally Posted by youth_anime_fan
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It's not at all funny. And there is absolutely no flow to what you wrote.
Clan? What Clan?
I'm the Master. I need no Clan.
O_O....ouch...that really hurt..XD..o well..i dont think poetry needs flow all the time...poetry i believe is something that expresses a part of you..i dont think that there has to be a "certain" way that you have to write things...i mean..poetry isnt there to please the people and give them that warm "feeling" or something like that...besides...all the people i shared it with....have laughed hard enough to cry...and thats what counts for me...i dont see poetry as an adult type thing...nor does it need to be understood from an adults view...but im not trying to insult u or nething...im jus saying that people have different views on things..and i can respect your thoughts..
tee hee -giggles- when i have to fart, i walk into Bath & Body Works! lol! i mean whats another smell?
XD...XD XD XD...ewww.....how very odd... =P...jeez...i didnt wanna know that XD..Originally Posted by steelangelanna
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