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    Waiting Patirntly

    Ten thousand seconds pass,
    as the wind blows.

    The earth turns,
    the sun glows.

    Time was lost,
    in a minute so vividly.

    Faith was wasting away,
    as I am waiting patiently.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    What was u wait'n for?.... It's buggin me, i just gotta know. Is it true love? that's what i thought it was. Tell me if im wrong. Very nice poem, alway's love ur works... Course u know that.
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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    I liked it. It doesn't really matter what she's waiting for though, even if it's just waiting for the bus or something.

    Having to wait is always kinda depressing, even though it's considerd to be a virtue.

    Hmmm... He's not technically human, so it wouldn't really be like cannibalism...
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