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    What do you see? [Poem]

    Do any of you see?
    What you're leading this world to become?
    Greed, Anger, Suffereing, Pain.
    All 4 become one
    Then you forget how to care
    Forget the others around you
    You just take care of yourself
    And the pure, innocent ones out there
    Who just want to make life a better place
    Suffer from all the things you take from them
    Some change into you
    The real ones stay who they are from the start
    Greed turns the hearts into men black, which causes anger
    Anger makes you say things you don't mean
    There for you cause pain
    And in the end all you do is..suffer


    p.s I really didn't spend a lot of time on it..kinda of one of those moments when you just have to write something. Tell me what you think.
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    an interesting poem to say the least. might i ask what inspired you to write it?
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    Yes! please! tell us what inspired you to write this! I'm quite interested.

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    Very nice. Puts a picture of events in my head. Kudos to you.

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