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an interesting poem to say the least. might i ask what inspired you to write it?
Do any of you see?
What you're leading this world to become?
Greed, Anger, Suffereing, Pain.
All 4 become one
Then you forget how to care
Forget the others around you
You just take care of yourself
And the pure, innocent ones out there
Who just want to make life a better place
Suffer from all the things you take from them
Some change into you
The real ones stay who they are from the start
Greed turns the hearts into men black, which causes anger
Anger makes you say things you don't mean
There for you cause pain
And in the end all you do is..suffer
p.s I really didn't spend a lot of time on it..kinda of one of those moments when you just have to write something. Tell me what you think.
Last edited by Im_a_fake; Feb 07, 2005 at 07:14 PM.
an interesting poem to say the least. might i ask what inspired you to write it?
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Yes! please! tell us what inspired you to write this! I'm quite interested.
Very nice. Puts a picture of events in my head. Kudos to you.
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