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    Otaku MuMu Champion Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart's Avatar
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    What to think?

    What to think,
    about my situation.
    She already knows,
    but do I tell her more?

    I wish to tell her,
    how i really feel,
    the love inside,
    what i have in store.

    What to think,
    and I reminise.
    do I continue,
    and keep wanting more.

    I wish to speak,
    with my angel once again,
    but to do so.
    might open another door.

    Do I pursue love,
    or let it be for now.
    Maybe I figure it out,
    and not hit the floor.

    What to think,
    and what should I do,
    I guess I'll like you for now,
    and not make myself a bore.

    But if love rears it's head,
    What to think if at all.
    So i guess it's like you now,
    'less you let me love you more.....



    Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    This is my favorite quote, but I can't remeber who said it.... funny though...

    "I wasn't kissing her... I was whispering in her mouth."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Otaku Tithe may be famous one day Tithe may be famous one day Tithe's Avatar
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    who is this one about? This was very good I can feel your longing...you really shoul be an author. I got an Idea IM me when you come on and I'll tell you about it! now I'm all happy! Keep writting justin! Irony: Thats my fave Quote! you copycat! This person you write about..I really do hope she returns your love you really deserve it. good luck man
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    Otaku Gin Nightingale may be famous one day Gin Nightingale may be famous one day Gin Nightingale's Avatar
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    Hmm... There are a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes. Some lines do not have correct punctuation but other than that, it's all right.

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    Otaku MuMu Champion Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart's Avatar
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    Thanks Gin, but as for grammer..... I speak this way. That may be an error to most, but if you speak this way... it's hard to change. PLus, I'm a little off the wall in my poetry anyway. I never was one to stay with structure, anyway. Oh, and I can't spell... but that's that. Thanks...

    K' (And no, that's not K Dash from KOF....)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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