what you want {P}

i told you
id never tell you what you want
unless it was the truth
............................................
she walked in
slowly and delicately
sundress on
make up made up
i know we were just friends
i know you dont care about me
and "i dont love you"
or at least thats what i said
there was a burning in me
as you looked at her
and told me how beautiful she was
i said
"thats not what you want"
you made eye contact and
she walked over
"baby, thats not what you want"
she didnt even say hello
just left her number
and said shed be home in 10 minuets
"baby listen, thats not what you want"
i said again
you asked if you could meet her there
she told you yes
and you began to leave
"baby listen please, thats not what you want!!!!"
i screamed
she ran back in to call someone and you came with her
you held her now
"baby i love you and i dont want you hurt
move out of the way of a broken heart!!!!"
you stepped to the right
and i shot her
her heart shattered like clay
and a piece fell at your feet
"baby im sorry", i say,
"but you dont want her"
you left me there
with a note
that read

"baby i love you,
and im not what
you want, i promised
never to say that
unless it was the truth."

That is ****ing beautiful. I love it. Seriously is it great I hope you write more like it because I've never read anything like it.

Epic, but damned gorgeous. Very nice job

Well, it has a nice story to it, however, the whole baby thing, was just too much.

cool poem keep it up !!^^!!

hehe thx!! its more of a story like thing! ive writen tons of them, but didnt know if they were ok or not so i thought id try it out on all of you!! oh and about the baby thing....i was talkin about my friend dean and his ex cece but he has always called me baby and i him...so thats where thats from.tehe!!

simple-damn it .i missed you again last night
damn it
damn it
damn it

Very well written. It has a good ring 2 it.

Yes; its fantastic! Wonderfully written origonal and great story to it :)! awsome job; You really should write more like this