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    Why do you taunt me? (poem)

    Every time I dream
    Your there
    Every time I close my eyes
    You haunt my every thought
    Why do you taunt me?
    Even after you left
    Or maybe I'll just always see you
    Standing there
    Your emerald eyes staring at me
    What I wouldn't give to kiss those lips
    One time before I wake
    But I always find that I'm too late
    My whole world comes crashing down
    As I simply open my eyes into reality
    But I don't want reality
    I much rather prefer my fantasy
    Standing with you is the only place I can smile
    The only place I can be happy
    ....
    Why to you taunt me?
    I only wish to stay with you

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    My eyes are getting a bit watery now. Nice poem T Elocin. You really know how to describe lost loves.

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    ,>_<, this its so lovely and beautyful and its sound like my long past dream went she gone and when home to her country i sorry its just so ,>_<, beautyful great job,>_<,

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    Aww that's really sad. Cheer up! :] Good work you've got there.

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    Nice poem, it's great

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    lol; thanks for your responses. I find it very ironic though; I've never had a boyfriend, yet I'm very good at describing lost loves. And; I'm not sad. Its a dream... ....... ... Its always a dream.

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    very nice keep up the good work
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