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    write me a poem [poem]

    write me a poem

    a cool spring nights
    the stretched clouds
    float eerily slow
    masking the moon's face
    but not its glow

    here i am
    walking slow
    strangers heads down
    ignoring the crowds
    i hear a sound
    the cat meows
    alone
    awake

    security of my hands
    a light grin
    above me chin

    the surface is still
    while the currents inside
    collide
    pulling my soul
    with its undertow
    leaving me to drown
    inside

    there is no life
    guard
    just the senses
    and that those things
    that they sense
    hence
    your misunderstanding
    of what i just said

    in this busy bright streets
    only the brightest stars
    shine
    through
    i look at their eyes
    but i see right through

    whispers
    in my head
    go with the flow

    i struggle
    for the surface
    and i feel my hands again

    i see those people
    and grab my pen.

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    Nice job, great done.

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    Yea! exactly what she said!

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    well gone good job

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