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    Otaku Kiri79 may be famous one day Kiri79 may be famous one day Kiri79's Avatar
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    Your Disapearing Soul

    Long through the night
    Where darkness falls
    You are sleeping innocently

    Then when morning breaks
    Darkness turning into light
    You are still in slumber

    Devils work
    Comes through the night sky
    And everyone's in torture

    You are still lying there
    Cold as ice
    Becoming one with nature

    Everyone's blind
    But I can see
    Your soul is disapearing

    Into the devil
    Your trying to fight back
    Making where once fog stood
    Into a clearing


    Did you get it? I didn't think you would.

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    Sad BUT true I like this GOOD WORK grade AAA+++

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    nice poem. keep it up^_^

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