Noob Clan Art

ok well here's mine..
i really wawnt you guys to be brutally honest
honesty isn't flamin..is it?
well here it is!
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c2...icture002c.jpg
don't have a scanner so took it with a camera lol

i like the detail in the collar the button are tine yet you can make them out
that pretty cool and i likemhow did the haor with the gray in the center
awesome. i like this drawing

First, Nao Chan: I like what you've done with all of the small detail. Such as the eyes, the lights in the back, and wrinkles in the clothing. That majorly adds life in the piece. You seem to have a problem that I do, the page is a little messy. CLean up after yourself. Just erase smudges and stray lines. Otherwise this is great work. Next, PartOfTheDEAD: This is really awesome. You DID draw this didn't you? Just kidding. It's great, but like the last one I gave my insight on, it's a little messy. clean it up a little. Great work both of you. Keep it up.

ok!! thx!
i tries to clean it....lol
just to show ...if you are messy it shows in your work lol

This art is very good guys, keep it up. Maybe i'll try drawing something for the clan..I repeat i will TRY to draw something lolz.

part of the dead
your pic is so cool, i loved it, and how you shade is really awsome

vincent
thanx for the comments, i'll put what you said in my mind ^^
and i'm trying to clean them up after i finishi with them ^^

lord
we're waiting for you TRY :D

wow you guys are really god at drawing, keep that up and you all someday will become the greatest artist of our screwed up nation.

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c2.../mypicture.jpg

You can barely see it lolz XD...Yea, i said i was gonna try and draw something...Here it is, it's not the best but its ok. One point for the Noobz clan YAY!!!! ^^