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    Noobs clan poem thread

    welcome to the poem thread! This is where you can post your poems and have people comment on them. But please no spaming and stay on topic! I hope you enjoy it!
    "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



    thats great!! thank you!!


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    Re: Noobs clan poem thread

    heres to songs i wrote, the first is called "Trip-hop, Indie OP", sorry all i am gonna double post i dont know if they will both fit...
    "Trip-Hop, Indie OP"

    Wait and see,
    watch and wait,
    sitting fine and great,
    bored,
    jumping along,
    going with the flow,
    sitting in a haze,
    staring off into space,
    singing away.

    Sitting and dreaming,
    of all the thing that I wish that I could have,
    friends are by far the best,
    love comes into last,
    out of recoverey,
    waiting for the right time,
    just to fell so alive.

    Indifferent to me,
    the trip-hop indie op.

    So I am the Bleach waching,
    love wanting,
    music loving,
    trip-ho indie op.

    This crazy songs describes me,
    the trip-hop indie op,
    my friends are great,
    Cassidy,Kevin, Megan, all the rest,
    but to me all my friends are the best.

    Up-tempo song of all things,
    sail away on devil's wings,
    me,
    the trip-hop indie op.
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

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    Re: Noobs clan poem thread

    That was my second son this is my first...

    "Burn the Promise"

    This is how I really am,
    so you can take me or leave me,
    loving or hating,
    thats not how I wanted it to be,
    but the way you ignored me when you said that you'd be my friend
    ...apparently not that way.

    So as I sit here raving and raging,
    at all the things I've done wrong,
    sitting in regret,
    thinking that it's over,
    but the flames that were supposed to go out were left smouldering,
    and now the flames of of rage have been rekindled,
    as I sit here nerve racked and quiet, keeping the fires low.

    Bear my teeth at the sight of jealousy and and hate,
    watching as the two take turns stabbing at me,
    from the inside,
    wanting to be happy,
    she goes back on her word,
    burn the promise,
    burn it to ash and bone.

    Relying on music, friends, and love,
    still looking for the last,
    ask my self is it through,
    So the promise,
    burn the promise,
    burn it to ash and bone.

    During the aftermath,
    skipping like a stone,
    carefree for the moment,
    waiting on the time,
    not wanting it to go back that way.

    So the promise,
    burn it down,
    burn it to ash and bone.
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    Re: Noobs clan poem thread

    very cool songs i like those very much
    your getting better
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Noobs clan poem thread

    here is some of my work.

    Don’t turn away

    Look at you standing, over there looking all
    Cool, look at me, hanging with my friends
    Acting like a fool. I see you approaching me
    I turn my head and walk away and I ask myself,
    How could I act this way? I know I love you, so what’s holding me back? I know I love you so what do I lack?

    Am I scared of what people will think?
    Am I scared that you might think I’m a freak?
    Am I scared that you just won’t get me?
    Or am I just scared of rejection?
    Am I just scared of rejection?

    I notice you from across the room with your hair
    Brushed back, you look so cool, talking on your
    Cell phone from Radio Shack, you see me too, for a moment we make eye contact, but what do I do? I turn away and I don’t look back. I know I love you so why do I feel that I have to turn away? I know I love you but what if you don’t feel the same?

    Am I scared of what people will think?
    Am I scared that you might think I’m a freak?
    Am I scared that you just won’t get me?
    Or am I just scared of rejection?
    Am I just scared of rejection?

    I walk up to you, I say hello and pass you a smile,
    You say hey too but you turn away like you’re in denial
    Did I miss my chance?
    "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



    thats great!! thank you!!


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    Re: Noobs clan poem thread

    hey its that one i like that one!!
    I've seen all you here before at the rise and the fall, lets go down and ring the bell at the Levity Ball.

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    Re: Noobs clan poem thread

    yeah! i'm glad you do! your songs are really good to!
    "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



    thats great!! thank you!!


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    Re: Noobs clan poem thread

    Friend or foe?

    A friend is a person that loves you no matter what
    A foe is a person that wants to stab you in the back
    A friend makes everything alright
    A foe wants to see you suffer
    So I ask you today, are you a friend or foe
    Do you want me to stay or go
    Do you want to make the tears or do you want to help dry them
    Will you let me cry on your shoulder or will you turn me away
    Friends I love you and I will never turn you away
    Foes you are forgiven and don’t expect me to turn you away
    Like you did me the other day so be careful
    Of what you say life is full of foes and when you are torn
    I’ll be there to help put the pieces back together
    Like every friend should even you people that have shone
    Me nothing but grief I’ll be there for you even though your
    Not there for me.
    "... And then, a ray of light pierced the darkness. The light turned into a figure of a person who was followed by a fairy, and also held the spirit of the forest..."



    thats great!! thank you!!


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