Nice... very interesting... Ok, I like it very much! It's very cool- the way you describe these two girls- so very different they are and his feelings to them just oposite of what he should feel- this happens very often in life, that's why I love it so much- you've managed to describe it so that I feel like I've been there and seen it happen, though this has never happened around me... It's great!!!
A wonderful work,good even it's old (my old ones are so childish you'd laugh)- very cool! ^^