I donno if I caught the meaning behind these either to be honest. HOWEVER I really enjoyed them. I like the style of your writing, your vocab. And the way they made me feel in general.
Now, again I'm no decent poet, but I just write things and don't get a meaning until after I write it (If there is a meaning in my poems at all) But hey, feel free to comment.
Tainted Desire
A figure so deep, so ghastly,
Twirling and flying in a mesmeric dance;
A dance that was one so heavenly,
Tainted upon site, into mesmeric trance.
Yet such beauty lay with a price,
Yet even with a moments pause;
A kiss would suffice,
To dark degree, gallows claws.
Once caught in the mesmeric trance,
Lay no life for those in height;
The feeding of within, the succubus swallow,
Lust a burden upon those who follow.
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3
Not one, nor two, but three.
Three is there, I only see.
Not one, not two, only three.
One is enough, for one
Two is too little for the three,
Yet that three, such a perfect number.
Such sanity comes within three,
Unlike the insanity in one or two,
Alone, or confused, hungry and fatigued.
Three for comfort,
Two for sex,
One for madness.
"And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floorShall be lifted — nevermore!"
I donno if I caught the meaning behind these either to be honest. HOWEVER I really enjoyed them. I like the style of your writing, your vocab. And the way they made me feel in general.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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