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    Re: 2 short and sweet poems

    Quote Originally Posted by The White Wolf View Post
    I really liked the first poem, sangogirl! It was very nice! So true too, T.T This part however didn't seem to click with me:



    I don't know... I just didn't really get it. But the poem overall was quite enjoyable! Nice work, SG! Continue writing!
    i meant that the petals were falling slowly like tears which kinda went with my mood. if any one else doesn't get it (it was a little hard to explain) imagine the flower sad and having it's petals are it's tears.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: 2 short and sweet poems

    nice i love it ..your writing is become better and better ..keep it
    this for you.
    I just hope to sleep
    And never awaken
    Nothing left in this world
    Could replace what you have taken....

    Foolish beating

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