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    24 hours of nothing

    Awake
    endless motion
    energy take
    sublime formation

    1 or 2
    maybe 3 or 4
    time to time
    never stopping

    what to do
    nothing to think of
    it enrages you
    yet nothing to think of

    24
    yet seemingless infinity
    in the dark
    insanity

    can u slip
    fall asleep
    close your eyes
    fall into your minds guise

    stay away
    can you really
    stay sane
    unpossiblity

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    Re: 24 hours of nothing

    I do not know really what to say but to start it all with the format... but there is another thing about this... it makes you want to read more... this could last for pages and pages.... in other words REALLY GOOD!!! great job
    death and life are one and the same

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    Re: 24 hours of nothing

    is it impossibility.
    Hmm it sounds nice has a little word play as well, i think u could describe the darkness better. but a awesome poem non the less
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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    Re: 24 hours of nothing

    hey I really like this poem. Different from alot of the stuff I see here. Don't get me wrong... every piece is original and unique in its own right. But there are only few that really seem to stand out and demand attention.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: 24 hours of nothing

    True true, at least it wasn't a big romancey kissy kissy poem. i think to many love poems sometimes its just nice that u can get to read some pure anguish.
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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    Re: 24 hours of nothing

    Quote Originally Posted by jaderabbit View Post
    True true, at least it wasn't a big romancey kissy kissy poem. i think to many love poems sometimes its just nice that u can get to read some pure anguish.
    ah... ya see the poem is not about darkness nor anguish but the insanity that you get from being trapped in a dark area for 24 hours u just sit there and nothing happens

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