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![]() Diamond in the Rough | 24 hours of nothing Awake endless motion energy take sublime formation 1 or 2 maybe 3 or 4 time to time never stopping what to do nothing to think of it enrages you yet nothing to think of 24 yet seemingless infinity in the dark insanity can u slip fall asleep close your eyes fall into your minds guise stay away can you really stay sane unpossiblity |
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![]() Devoted Otaku Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: death and life again
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![]() Credits: 14,011 | Re: 24 hours of nothing I do not know really what to say but to start it all with the format... but there is another thing about this... it makes you want to read more... this could last for pages and pages.... in other words REALLY GOOD!!! great job ![]()
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![]() ![]() Credits: 7,251 | Re: 24 hours of nothing is it impossibility. Hmm it sounds nice has a little word play as well, i think u could describe the darkness better. but a awesome poem non the less
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,215 | Re: 24 hours of nothing hey I really like this poem. Different from alot of the stuff I see here. Don't get me wrong... every piece is original and unique in its own right. But there are only few that really seem to stand out and demand attention. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 7,251 | Re: 24 hours of nothing True true, at least it wasn't a big romancey kissy kissy poem. i think to many love poems sometimes its just nice that u can get to read some pure anguish.
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