Thread: 24 hours of nothing

I do not know really what to say but to start it all with the format... but there is another thing about this... it makes you want to read more... this could last for pages and pages.... in other words REALLY GOOD!!! great job

is it impossibility.
Hmm it sounds nice has a little word play as well, i think u could describe the darkness better. but a awesome poem non the less

hey I really like this poem. Different from alot of the stuff I see here. Don't get me wrong... every piece is original and unique in its own right. But there are only few that really seem to stand out and demand attention.

True true, at least it wasn't a big romancey kissy kissy poem. i think to many love poems sometimes its just nice that u can get to read some pure anguish.

Originally Posted by jaderabbit

True true, at least it wasn't a big romancey kissy kissy poem. i think to many love poems sometimes its just nice that u can get to read some pure anguish.

ah... ya see the poem is not about darkness nor anguish but the insanity that you get from being trapped in a dark area for 24 hours u just sit there and nothing happens