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    2big Poems

    Hello I have 2 big poems I 'll post one get some responces then post the other one here you go.

    These Thoughts

    There are to many
    I dont know what to think
    It just stinks

    I walk talking to a friend
    sidetracked by the thoughts
    Thinking of the end
    of people that brought all the happiness and sad
    they seem so bad

    I think of everything
    the things that went wrong or right
    And from winter to spring
    I still have these thoughts
    of sadness, happiness and hope
    Thats what I feel and think

    well thats the first hope you like it
    give you the second in a little

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    Re: 2big Poems

    It's better after you showed me ^_^ Nice job!

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    Re: 2big Poems

    only one grammaratic mistake

    Second stanza, fourth line sadness should be there. Not sad.

    Either then tht it's good stuff.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: 2big Poems

    Yeah I noticed right after Cliked the save thread button
    thanks to the both of you
    @Blade x I know you have alot of mistake on yours too lol

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    Re: 2big Poems

    well i dnt stop the flow of writing. I jus write and submit but sometimes i do check on my spelling n stuff.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: 2big Poems

    Okay kiddies no more chatting here ^_^

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    Re: 2big Poems

    hey I need people to post in here they need to chat
    lol

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    Re: 2big Poems

    Chat and it will be closed o.O

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