When I think of you, I cry tears of blood
The pain you left with me
Builds up until I'm ready to explode
Then I know how much better my life is without you
You may think that without you I am nothing
But the truth is that without me you are nothing
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When I think of you, I cry tears of blood
The pain you left with me
Builds up until I'm ready to explode
Then I know how much better my life is without you
You may think that without you I am nothing
But the truth is that without me you are nothing
:thumb: int get it much but keep it up..
I think you should look at a different writing perspective. Instead of writing with an "I" voice, write with something a little more different. Make the character distant from youself? Or perhaps keep the character as yourself, just change the way you present.