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    <3 I love less than three

    LIFE........................................DEATH
    beginning.................................and the end
    why we will laugh......................our reason to cry
    together is where we belong yet different as chaos
    why are our best dream always turned nightmares
    courage faith trust HEART break shatterd alone
    diveded asunder broken hearts hope is lost
    but not for long for within each other we
    find the darkest secrets and the light
    to our own lives together forever
    where reasons fade and we
    living in a painful bliss
    mold our lives into
    all the infinite
    possibilities
    LOVE
    grrr this is supposed to be in the shape of a heart... I guess it's going to be too finiky if someone could tell me how to fix this please... ^_^ the dots are a temp solution...
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    Re: <3 I love less than three

    It's wonderful ^^ I like the heart ^^ nice job ^^
    well lets see I really don't know what to pick out to say was bad it's really good ^^ but I say to alot of people (don't get mad) lol I like my poems to tell a stroy so a person can image it in their mind ^^ I think more vivid words would make it a bit better ^^ but other from that good job ^^
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    Re: <3 I love less than three

    believe me when I say that I'm the same way but it's kinda hard to make vivid words fit a shape in a poem these things are really finicky but I'll see what I can do... I've made a few changes and I think that it makes it a little better... I hope it does because I forgot to save the old one... ahaha just kidding. (I'm not really a poet I just neede to express myself)
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