14 and damn near grown
But can’t stand the fact of being alone
An empty heart, an empty home
But I’m still 14 and damn near grown
18 and out she said to me
My sorrow she could not see
In side I was begging and pleading
But I said 4 more years I’m 14
I love her, doubt she feels the same
Since I was born I was trapped in her game
My sorrow to whom I blame?
I blame her, she's to blame!
I wish time would halt! Halt to a stop
Her trust in me has totally dropped
To the point I can’t walk around the block
But I’ll love her, a love that'll never stop
4 more years and I’ll be out
Kind of funny the way I acted proud
But on the fateful day I’ll be out
I'll plead my sanity out
"MOM I LOVE YOU I REALLY DO
I'M SOORY FOR THE WAY I'VE ACTED TOWARDS YOU
BUT YOU KNOW I'VE NEVER BEEN THE ONE TO ACTED OUT
BUT KNOW UR READY TO PUT ME OUT
YOU TREAT ME LIKE I'M 3 AGAIN
3 TO 18 THIS MAKES NO SENSE MAN
I PUT MY AFFERTS TOTTALLY IVAIN
YOU’RE THE ONE TO MAKE ME GO INSAIN
YOU NEVER ASK ME WHY I CRY
FOR THAT I WISHED TO DIE
I WONDER WHAT WOULD HAVE IF I WAS NEVER BORN
YEA! A THOUGHT SO SCORN
I HATE YOU, YET I LOVE YOU
YOU KNOW I'M UR BABY GIRL BUT WHY DO YOU TREAT ME THE WAY YOU DO"
I'm 14 and damn near grown
She set me up to be alone
Shippo is determined to become a lvl higherI'm a solider of Pen and Paper!<3 Atomik_Sprout <3
i love the poem and allot of kids feel this way towards a mom or dad
and its sad that they don't bother to ask why there kid is crying or sad
its why so many kids do stupid things ,to get attention just so
there parents will notice them, and thats pretty sad but this poem
point it out so well very awesome poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
a very good poet, Shippo101.
immpresive.
but,.... i do not know why u use such a big font size....
i think 16 or 18 is better that that big font.. (^_^)
i think it would be better (for me) to read your poem.
by the way.. it is a sad poem... *uhh..*
this poem is rather nice the only thing I see wrong with it (and this is a personal thing) is that the letters are big and pink
this poem truly depicts how most kid feel toward there parents! And you did a really good job on this one! The only thing I saw from a critic stand point was you had it divided into stanzas but then then just got longer! Even still it was excellent because the pain and the emotion just brought the poem to life! great job!!!
Ugh.. Font color and size was a bad choice. AND I'm not even getting on the spelling..
Seduced by Flesh
i love this post. i lke it because it sound like how i feel about my mom. if i could say this to my mom it would be so sweet!:thumbsup:
poohs my boo
Great Poem Shippo Letters Toooooooooo Bad.......................
Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon
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