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    4 your eyes only

    4 ur eyes only

    4 ur eyes only
    no one else can see
    the love between us
    its only u and me.
    don't forget even though u do
    i love u
    so that's y i'm true

    repeat after me
    don't u see it's 4 ur eyes only.
    don't spread the secret between u and me.

    soo..... tell me if u'll like it. it was for someone special but i don't know if i should let him read it.
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    Re: 4 your eyes only

    Quote Originally Posted by ryomakurosaki View Post
    4 ur eyes only

    4 ur eyes only
    no one else can see
    the love between us
    its only u and me.
    don't forget even though u do
    i love u
    so that's y i'm true

    repeat after me
    don't u see it's 4 ur eyes only.
    don't spread the secret between u and me.

    soo..... tell me if u'll like it. it was for someone special but i don't know if i should let him read it.
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!

    that was great, for once someone did a peom that wasnt sad. It actually made me smile. great peom, nothing about it was bad.

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    Re: 4 your eyes only

    nice short poem. compare my poems, it's uplifting and i like how it's got a feel of a post note you would on a fridge door with couples living together and stuff.

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    Re: 4 your eyes only

    Awwwww.....how cute!!!!! It's so romantic and adorable and its short as well!!! I love it so much!!!!!! I hope to see more!!!!!
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    Re: 4 your eyes only

    Quote Originally Posted by anime_being_god View Post
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!

    that was great, for once someone did a peom that wasnt sad. It actually made me smile. great peom, nothing about it was bad.
    i agree another happy poem this trend needs to pick up a bit
    though i suck at happy stuff lol anyway though very awesome poem
    with happiness in it hope you post more
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: 4 your eyes only

    Oh, I adore this one... it's so nice, so sweet and full of secrets... Trully enjoyed reading it!!! Somethig in it is so wonderful that it makes it great even though it's short...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: 4 your eyes only

    Thank you ryomakurosaki for this poem this has open my eyes and i will not forget about you this time and hope to bring everything back normally as we been into thank you and i will be yours.
    and i am very impresssed with the poem you have made into putting effort into i love it.

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    Re: 4 your eyes only

    secarts and love feeling here too ...another short poem and nice shy you make it at the end ...great poem ...this i love it ....more ...you imporve ....keep up

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