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    This is for ****

    No the title is a preson's name, not the rude word!!!


    This is for you,
    Remember the first time we met?
    Complete strangers, not aware of others’ presence
    Yet I smiled at you

    Soon after we met again …
    A tragic incident met your life,
    Which will leave a scar in your memories forever
    But thank GOD you’re okay

    You deserved your justice,
    You deserved to be free again and you did
    But there was something missing in you
    A lack of smile, joy, glee and delight

    I came in your life with only one aim in my mind-
    To make you happy again,
    To make you forget about that heartbreaking event
    And I was making you happy

    You made me glad in return,
    I was happy whenever we met
    Even though you didn’t notice it
    But little did I know,
    You fell in love with me

    I never knew until the day you told me,
    In the freshest day of spring,
    During the marvelous of the sunsets
    You told me you loved me

    Those three words – “I love you”
    Meant a lot to me,
    I was so glad to hear that
    I held you in my arms,
    Held against your warm body

    It was so peaceful,
    But we knew it wasn’t possible,
    Because we had other things in mind
    You knew I couldn’t love you,
    I already belonged to someone else




    Nevertheless I didn’t give up on you,
    Your gentle smile,
    Your warm hugs
    Your lovely presence was blissful enough

    I couldn’t possibly need anything else …
    We had our own differences,
    You were aware of that
    I could feel your pain

    That day I had made up my mind,
    I knew the consequences of my actions,
    But it couldn’t go on for long
    It was painful for me to just leave you like that

    That day I acted like a jerk,
    I wasn’t the sweet guy anymore,
    I wasn’t the caring person,
    I acted completely different

    I hid the pain,
    Even though I couldn’t love you,
    It had to be over
    I acted foolishly,
    You were shocked and crossed

    I knew there that it was over
    You had to break your ties down with me
    I acted like a fool for a purpose,
    So you wouldn’t feel the same way for me anymore …

    It was over, finished …
    I don’t know what you’re thinking now,
    But you’re still an Angel to me,
    A little angel who can take care of herself now


    I’m sorry I had to end it this way …

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    Re: This is for ****

    this poem speaks the truth and thats what makes it so awesome a poem
    loveing yet never knowing the one true love you know is your sole mate.
    i was like this for someone very speacail but that was a while back.
    anyway though very awesome poem and i can see your point of veiw on this
    and thoink your words are awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: This is for ****

    Thanks Chris for your sweet comment I hope you're feeling better now ^_^

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    Re: This is for ****

    i am becuase now thanks ^_^ and i hope you are also
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: This is for ****

    I am ... oh and it's just a poem, just ideas and emotions ...

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    Re: This is for ****

    I think this poem is awesome! It makes me think of similar situations that I went through. This poem is very well written and it speaks to me! Every word has it's on emotion forming to make one awesome poem! Hope to see more of your work!

    Excellent job!

    BlueFox1

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    Re: This is for ****

    Those are just plain emotions ^_^

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    Re: This is for ****

    shit, that poems gr8 another one that truly toutched me i realy dont know what to say to this it just so well done i love it

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