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    Title: ...............(I couldn't think of a title so... ya..... Thats my title than.... ^^)

    My heart still pounds so rapidly.........
    My personality continues to act so kindly....
    My lips just wants me to kiss you.......
    As my thoughts want me to say I love you too.....

    You leave me so breathless.....
    That I wish I wasn't so deathless......
    You want me to smile........
    That I want you to stay with me for a while......

    Fade was the only thing I felt....
    Until you came to my heart.......
    Tears was the only thing I welt........
    But your love is what got me from the start.......

    Complete this fallen angel my dove...........
    Complete this missing heart..............
    Since you are that missing part..........
    Since you are the one I love...........

    Hold my hand to keep me soaring..........
    Touch my heart to leave me breathing for you.......
    Hug me tighter to keep my heart roaring.......
    Kiss me gently to make me keep loving you too...............

    I love you in many different ways..........
    Since thats the only words I want to hear you say......


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    Don't say you aren't good. This is very good^-^. I can almost feel the emotions myself. You explain it so..deeply. Great work & If you do get better then...wow i can't wait!^^!!!
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Ah, I absolutely have to agree! This poem had so much emotion to it! I absolutely loved reading it! My favorite part was:

    "You leave me so breathless.....
    That I wish I wasn't so deathless......
    You want me to smile........
    That I want you to stay with me for a while......"

    In this part, it reflects alot on me, and I loved it! Very good job kuwi!



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    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    Ah, I absolutely have to agree! This poem had so much emotion to it! I absolutely loved reading it! My favorite part was:

    "You leave me so breathless.....
    That I wish I wasn't so deathless......
    You want me to smile........
    That I want you to stay with me for a while......"

    In this part, it reflects alot on me, and I loved it! Very good job kuwi!
    yea the poem was full of emotions it reminded me of one of my last relationships that i had awhile a go,also that was my favorit part too
    when the mask comes off the real me appeares

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    As for a title, how about "the only words I want to hear you say"?

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