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    Re: Abandoned

    Awww... I just read it and wanna say: "You can talk to me! I could understand..." ^^ (just shiny little me)

    A nice poem... simple, lots of emotion... I could relate to it (I feel alike it right now...) and I enjoyed reading it... Nothing more to say I guess. I hope to see more from you ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Wow, this is a sad poem indeed.
    The whole poem makes sense and it was enjoyable to read.
    Keep up the excellent work! ^^

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    Re: Abandoned

    This poem depicted depression... *sad*... The lines of this poem, even short, were so clear and left a sad imagery. As I go on reading this poem, the sadness felt like my own and many people can relate to this (pins and needles feeling deep inside and feeling empty and all). I really liked this poem.

    Keep up the superb work, Saz.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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