There's a love that we seek
that we'd like to meet
someone really sweet
a love that has cute feet
I love a personwith the eyes of an ANGEL
with curly hair and tangles
the person to mingle and mangle
above the love
there's a dove
flying over us
but we might
not ever see
the who we
want to love
isnt that just sad
does it make you
really mad
does it hurt really bad
for the love you never had
Above all the love
we will never find
I wont advertise anymore just please quit harrassing me!
okay (i despise rhyming poems, just FYI)
not bad, some mistakes here and there. way more description is needed though, seriously i left me wanting for more when there was nothing. dont think too hard when you write, it becomes crap then if you do. poems are about emotions, it is basic, let them rule the poem.
ok...thanks alot for the tips i despise them to it's just so much easier,and at least they make sense.
I wont advertise anymore just please quit harrassing me!
i love your poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HolderOfTheDarkChalice's LiL sis
I agree with tupac very very good poem
thank u SasuraiHell
go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
Its short but I LIKE IT!!!
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