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![]() | Absence pain Your absence killing me Every things around me remembering me you With your face, with your hands, with your voice With that space that you left it when you gone With the deep sadness that I feel it after you After you, I didn’t feel sad at anyone Losing you make me forget any taste to any sad or pain After you all the colors are black All the days are same All the streets are empty A lot of questions in my head, but with out ant answers And I am like these questions A question with out answer A sad with out limit A life with out hope A human without soul A sea without shore A passenger without address |
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![]() | Re: Absence pain I love the abecedarian like tone of the last five lines. |
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![]() ![]() | Re: Absence pain Sis.. you need to work on your grammar still ^^ First of all... the descriptions are nice ^^ I could picture the emptiness you felt.. well I too feel the same thing.. lol ^^ *sigh* well.. other than that.. it was nice ^^ keep it up sis! |
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