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Old Oct 18, 2009, 12:51 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Absence pain

Your absence killing me
Every things around me remembering me you
With your face, with your hands, with your voice
With that space that you left it when you gone
With the deep sadness that I feel it after you
After you,
I didn’t feel sad at anyone
Losing you make me forget any taste to any sad or pain
After you all the colors are black
All the days are same
All the streets are empty
A lot of questions in my head, but with out ant answers
And I am like these questions
A question with out answer
A sad with out limit
A life with out hope
A human without soul
A sea without shore
A passenger without address
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Old Oct 18, 2009, 01:09 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Absence pain

I love the abecedarian like tone of the last five lines.
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Sis.. you need to work on your grammar still ^^

First of all... the descriptions are nice ^^ I could picture the emptiness you felt.. well I too feel the same thing.. lol ^^ *sigh* well.. other than that.. it was nice ^^ keep it up sis!
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