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NICELY DONE, CHANTI!! Words cannot decribe how impressed I am by this set of poems. I think that this is some of your best work yet. I like your choice of words and your work was well put together.
Mad props to you!
Change- An acrostic
Challenges of life overwhelm the mind
Hanging in the balance of space and time
Angling near the end of my self-made path
Never ending mental engagements
Giving way to mental derangements
Endangering my sense of sanity.
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I may have written three of these over my lifetime. However never like this. They were always one word after the letter deals. And it's always been an assignment for school. Not my own feelings/thoughts poetry. I know it's short. But I am rather pleased with it.
Last edited by bratling; Dec 19, 2008 at 12:02 PM.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
*Stands up and claps.*
NICELY DONE, CHANTI!! Words cannot decribe how impressed I am by this set of poems. I think that this is some of your best work yet. I like your choice of words and your work was well put together.
Mad props to you!
Wow. Thanks. I'm really glad you like them. I enjoyed the challenge of following rules and actually found the structure helped me be more creative with my words then I normally would have been. You know how I am about grammar and all. Thank you muchly.Originally Posted by atomik_sprout
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
One of my teachers needs to read it. Hopefully, she will become "less Hitler".
Haha. Teachers tend to be a little commanding. But really they're just trying to make sure the kids all learn their lessons. Sometimes they just forget that kids aren't robots.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
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