*the act of waiting*

**equinn** · May 13, 2006 03:25 AM

The Act of Waiting

The act of waiting
Nothing more grueling
To quicken, there's none
Try helping, that's done.
Pardon me, apathy
You offter to set me free
But in you, I cannot see
The thoughts of him- that is he.
Please allow me to wait
There I am free to speculate
And every moment lends itself
For me to fluster, anticipate.
The act of waiting,
Nothing more grueling,
But in waiting, I am his,
And in waiting, I am his.
Oh, the sweet pain of romance
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no one likes it i should not of put on my poem ps its what i feel i write.

**Blade X** · May 13, 2006 04:12 AM

wow, equinn i like this one abt the girls having a crush on a guy. This ur second one abt girls having a crush on a guy. I wonder if there's a guy tht u really like. lol. Anyway i cant really decide between the two. Both of them are quite good. woot, first to reply here.

**Reese** · May 13, 2006 04:14 AM

Wow.... I enjoy reading ur poetry. U chose ur words wisely and not only do u create a consistant atmosphere throughout the poem, you also managed to compell audience and maintain their attention.

I look forward 2 seeing more of ur work in future. ^_^

Edit :
Just so you know, I simply cant decide which I like better.

**cerebrum** · May 13, 2006 04:33 AM

This is simply superb Equinn. I absolutely adore the way u set out ur poems. Ur on ur way to the top grl. ^_^

Keep up the good work.

**equinn** · May 13, 2006 04:55 AM

thanks everyone your so nice and i wasnt going to do another one but now i know to do them more often thanks^__^

**ketaro** · May 13, 2006 06:29 PM

wow man this poem was awesome, i like the way you wrote it, it really makes the poem to be applausible.

**michiru726** · May 13, 2006 06:40 PM

awesome work! i can relate to it on some parts... ^^; nice choice of words, short but concise... i think i like this one better, but the other one is nice as well... ^_^

**Soldat of life** · May 14, 2006 06:43 AM

Stoping is like breaking away from yourself, going beyond is what nourishes the soul and helps you to go on whatever the task

Nice work by the way and waiting is what we do quite often, unless your the type that likes to take action.

Take Care...

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