*the act of waiting*

*equinn* · May 13, 2006, 04:25 AM

The Act of Waiting

The act of waiting
Nothing more grueling
To quicken, there's none
Try helping, that's done.
Pardon me, apathy
You offter to set me free
But in you, I cannot see
The thoughts of him- that is he.
Please allow me to wait
There I am free to speculate
And every moment lends itself
For me to fluster, anticipate.
The act of waiting,
Nothing more grueling,
But in waiting, I am his,
And in waiting, I am his.
Oh, the sweet pain of romance
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no one likes it i should not of put on my poem ps its what i feel i write.

*Blade X* · May 13, 2006, 05:12 AM

wow, equinn i like this one abt the girls having a crush on a guy. This ur second one abt girls having a crush on a guy. I wonder if there's a guy tht u really like. lol. Anyway i cant really decide between the two. Both of them are quite good. woot, first to reply here.

Reese · May 13, 2006, 05:14 AM

Wow.... I enjoy reading ur poetry. U chose ur words wisely and not only do u create a consistant atmosphere throughout the poem, you also managed to compell audience and maintain their attention.

I look forward 2 seeing more of ur work in future. ^_^

Edit :
Just so you know, I simply cant decide which I like better.

cerebrum · May 13, 2006, 05:33 AM

This is simply superb Equinn. I absolutely adore the way u set out ur poems. Ur on ur way to the top grl. ^_^

Keep up the good work.

*equinn* · May 13, 2006, 05:55 AM

thanks everyone your so nice and i wasnt going to do another one but now i know to do them more often thanks^__^

*ketaro* · May 13, 2006, 07:29 PM

wow man this poem was awesome, i like the way you wrote it, it really makes the poem to be applausible.

michiru726 · May 13, 2006, 07:40 PM

awesome work! i can relate to it on some parts... ^^; nice choice of words, short but concise... i think i like this one better, but the other one is nice as well... ^_^

Soldat of life · May 14, 2006, 07:43 AM

Stoping is like breaking away from yourself, going beyond is what nourishes the soul and helps you to go on whatever the task

Nice work by the way and waiting is what we do quite often, unless your the type that likes to take action.

Take Care...

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May 13, 2006, 04:25 AM	#1 (permalink)
equinn ★~Ao's Irish Fariy ~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,794 Thanks: 15 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts	*the act of waiting* The Act of Waiting The act of waiting Nothing more grueling To quicken, there's none Try helping, that's done. Pardon me, apathy You offter to set me free But in you, I cannot see The thoughts of him- that is he. Please allow me to wait There I am free to speculate And every moment lends itself For me to fluster, anticipate. The act of waiting, Nothing more grueling, But in waiting, I am his, And in waiting, I am his. Oh, the sweet pain of romance -----------------------------Double Post Merge--------------------------------------------- no one likes it i should not of put on my poem ps its what i feel i write. __________________ Elizabeth love's Philip Last edited by equinn; May 13, 2006 at 05:09 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost
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May 13, 2006, 05:12 AM	#2 (permalink)
Blade X AO's Demon Slayer Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Protecting my loved one. Posts: 1,606 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: the act of waiting wow, equinn i like this one abt the girls having a crush on a guy. This ur second one abt girls having a crush on a guy. I wonder if there's a guy tht u really like. lol. Anyway i cant really decide between the two. Both of them are quite good. woot, first to reply here. __________________ Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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May 13, 2006, 05:14 AM	#3 (permalink)
Reese Otaku Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 237 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: the act of waiting Wow.... I enjoy reading ur poetry. U chose ur words wisely and not only do u create a consistant atmosphere throughout the poem, you also managed to compell audience and maintain their attention. I look forward 2 seeing more of ur work in future. ^_^ Edit : Just so you know, I simply cant decide which I like better.
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May 13, 2006, 05:33 AM	#4 (permalink)
cerebrum Otaku Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Some part of the universe. Posts: 295 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: the act of waiting This is simply superb Equinn. I absolutely adore the way u set out ur poems. Ur on ur way to the top grl. ^_^ Keep up the good work. __________________ Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
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May 13, 2006, 05:55 AM	#5 (permalink)
equinn ★~Ao's Irish Fariy ~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,794 Thanks: 15 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts	Re: the act of waiting thanks everyone your so nice and i wasnt going to do another one but now i know to do them more often thanks^__^ __________________ Elizabeth love's Philip
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May 13, 2006, 07:29 PM	#6 (permalink)
ketaro You's Trollin Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,292 Thanks: 30 Thanked 37 Times in 35 Posts	Re: the act of waiting wow man this poem was awesome, i like the way you wrote it, it really makes the poem to be applausible.
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May 13, 2006, 07:40 PM	#7 (permalink)
michiru726 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: 180 degrees parallel to my monitor Posts: 99 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: the act of waiting awesome work! i can relate to it on some parts... ^^; nice choice of words, short but concise... i think i like this one better, but the other one is nice as well... ^_^ __________________ "Deviously Revamped."
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