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    *the act of waiting*

    The Act of Waiting



    The act of waiting
    Nothing more grueling
    To quicken, there's none
    Try helping, that's done.
    Pardon me, apathy
    You offter to set me free
    But in you, I cannot see
    The thoughts of him- that is he.
    Please allow me to wait
    There I am free to speculate
    And every moment lends itself
    For me to fluster, anticipate.
    The act of waiting,
    Nothing more grueling,
    But in waiting, I am his,
    And in waiting, I am his.
    Oh, the sweet pain of romance
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    no one likes it i should not of put on my poem ps its what i feel i write.
    Last edited by equinn; May 13, 2006 at 04:09 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Re: *the act of waiting*

    wow, equinn i like this one abt the girls having a crush on a guy. This ur second one abt girls having a crush on a guy. I wonder if there's a guy tht u really like. lol. Anyway i cant really decide between the two. Both of them are quite good. woot, first to reply here.

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    Re: *the act of waiting*

    Wow.... I enjoy reading ur poetry. U chose ur words wisely and not only do u create a consistant atmosphere throughout the poem, you also managed to compell audience and maintain their attention.

    I look forward 2 seeing more of ur work in future. ^_^

    Edit :
    Just so you know, I simply cant decide which I like better.

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    Re: *the act of waiting*

    This is simply superb Equinn. I absolutely adore the way u set out ur poems. Ur on ur way to the top grl. ^_^

    Keep up the good work.
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    Re: *the act of waiting*

    thanks everyone your so nice and i wasnt going to do another one but now i know to do them more often thanks^__^

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    Re: *the act of waiting*

    wow man this poem was awesome, i like the way you wrote it, it really makes the poem to be applausible.

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    Re: *the act of waiting*

    awesome work! i can relate to it on some parts... ^^; nice choice of words, short but concise... i think i like this one better, but the other one is nice as well... ^_^

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    Re: *the act of waiting*

    Stoping is like breaking away from yourself, going beyond is what nourishes the soul and helps you to go on whatever the task

    Nice work by the way and waiting is what we do quite often, unless your the type that likes to take action.

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