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    Otaku setsuna mudo1617 may be famous one day setsuna mudo1617 may be famous one day setsuna mudo1617's Avatar
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    Addicted

    I heard you're doing ok
    But I want you to know
    I'm a dick
    I'm addicted to you
    I can't pretend I don't care
    When you don't think about me
    Do you think I deserve this?

    I tried to make you happy but you left anyway

    I'm trying to forget that
    I'm addicted to you
    But I want it and I need it
    I'm addicted to you
    Now it's over
    Can't forget what you said
    And I never wanna do this again
    Heartbreaker

    Since the day I met you
    And after all we've been through
    I'm still a dick I'm addicted to you
    I think you know that it's true
    I'd run a thousand miles to get you
    Do you think I deserve this?

    "I tried to make you happy
    I did all that I could
    Just to keep you
    But you left anyway

    heartbreaker......
    heartbreaker......

    How long will I be waiting?
    Until the end of time
    I don't know why I'm still waiting
    I can't make you mine

    Heartbreaker
    I'm addicted to you"

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    Re: Addicted

    nice one setsuna...writing with ur feelings......doing everything u want for this girl u love.....despite her rejecting u keep coming...proving ur heart for her

    Keep it up

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Addicted

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    nice one setsuna...writing with ur feelings......doing everything u want for this girl u love.....despite her rejecting u keep coming...proving ur heart for her

    Keep it up
    thanx,i will keep that in mind.

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    Re: Addicted

    T_Tso im not #1 T_T o well u expressed ur feelings good!^^

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    Re: Addicted

    awwwwww....thats sweet. u should give this 2 u know who


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    Re: Addicted

    Yea This was a alright poem, Some of it was a bit hard to understand, But I get the message that you were trying to send out. The one thing that made me stumble was this:

    When you don't think about me
    Do you think I deserve this?
    I didnt quite understand, I mean how do you know when some one is not thinking of you? I donno dont take my critisism in a bad manner! I liked your poem! Keep it up!!

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