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Reply With Quotenice one setsuna...writing with ur feelings......doing everything u want for this girl u love.....despite her rejecting u keep coming...proving ur heart for her
Keep it up
I heard you're doing ok
But I want you to know
I'm a dick
I'm addicted to you
I can't pretend I don't care
When you don't think about me
Do you think I deserve this?
I tried to make you happy but you left anyway
I'm trying to forget that
I'm addicted to you
But I want it and I need it
I'm addicted to you
Now it's over
Can't forget what you said
And I never wanna do this again
Heartbreaker
Since the day I met you
And after all we've been through
I'm still a dick I'm addicted to you
I think you know that it's true
I'd run a thousand miles to get you
Do you think I deserve this?
"I tried to make you happy
I did all that I could
Just to keep you
But you left anyway
heartbreaker......
heartbreaker......
How long will I be waiting?
Until the end of time
I don't know why I'm still waiting
I can't make you mine
Heartbreaker
I'm addicted to you"
nice one setsuna...writing with ur feelings......doing everything u want for this girl u love.....despite her rejecting u keep coming...proving ur heart for her
Keep it up
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
thanx,i will keep that in mind.Originally Posted by Blade X
T_Tso im not #1 T_T o well u expressed ur feelings good!^^
awwwwww....thats sweet. u should give this 2 u know who
Yea This was a alright poem, Some of it was a bit hard to understand, But I get the message that you were trying to send out. The one thing that made me stumble was this:
I didnt quite understand, I mean how do you know when some one is not thinking of you? I donno dont take my critisism in a bad manner! I liked your poem! Keep it up!When you don't think about me
Do you think I deserve this?!
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