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Old Jun 16, 2006, 04:07 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Addicted

I heard you're doing ok
But I want you to know
I'm a dick
I'm addicted to you
I can't pretend I don't care
When you don't think about me
Do you think I deserve this?

I tried to make you happy but you left anyway

I'm trying to forget that
I'm addicted to you
But I want it and I need it
I'm addicted to you
Now it's over
Can't forget what you said
And I never wanna do this again
Heartbreaker

Since the day I met you
And after all we've been through
I'm still a dick I'm addicted to you
I think you know that it's true
I'd run a thousand miles to get you
Do you think I deserve this?

"I tried to make you happy
I did all that I could
Just to keep you
But you left anyway

heartbreaker......
heartbreaker......

How long will I be waiting?
Until the end of time
I don't know why I'm still waiting
I can't make you mine

Heartbreaker
I'm addicted to you"
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Old Jun 16, 2006, 05:36 AM   #2 (permalink)
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nice one setsuna...writing with ur feelings......doing everything u want for this girl u love.....despite her rejecting u keep coming...proving ur heart for her

Keep it up
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Old Jun 16, 2006, 05:40 AM   #3 (permalink)
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nice one setsuna...writing with ur feelings......doing everything u want for this girl u love.....despite her rejecting u keep coming...proving ur heart for her

Keep it up
thanx,i will keep that in mind.
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Old Jun 16, 2006, 09:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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T_Tso im not #1 T_T o well u expressed ur feelings good!^^
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awwwwww....thats sweet. u should give this 2 u know who
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Old Jun 16, 2006, 08:47 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Addicted

Yea This was a alright poem, Some of it was a bit hard to understand, But I get the message that you were trying to send out. The one thing that made me stumble was this:

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When you don't think about me
Do you think I deserve this?
I didnt quite understand, I mean how do you know when some one is not thinking of you? I donno dont take my critisism in a bad manner! I liked your poem! Keep it up!!
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