addiction

im about tired of love poems here so ima write a true poem that we all might relate too.

I am addicted.
something that i cant control
something that i cant hold
something i have know has hold of me

the need of wanting
the need of having
the need of desire
like fire in my veins

a feeling i cant shake
a felling i can't explain.
i know i should stop
i know i will get caught
but this has hold of me
this has hold of everything i do

knowing i have lost all will power
to control such a urge that i have
no control over. it has me
it has my arms, my legs, it has...me

from killing to get it
to raping to get it.
this addiction is too strong
this addiction has gone on for to long
my will power is long gone.
im addicted.


i was bored so i wrote this

Nice poem, I wonder what it's based on b_b but still, nice use of words and emotions. Great job! ^_^

oooh so pretty, i love it, you should do more like that

thank you thank you so much. i waz about tired of all these love and emo poems. but i think everyone can relate to it in a way.

nice poem..
i like it..
keep up the good work:-)

That was an interesting poem, keep em coming ^_^ I thought it sums up what a lot of people are like in real life.

I agree with Rave. Its a cool poem although I don't know what its based on, if you said what it was I didn't read the other comments so yeah. But still I like it. Keep it up

it waz just a poem about something that you cant shake. nothing to do with me