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    addiction

    im about tired of love poems here so ima write a true poem that we all might relate too.

    I am addicted.
    something that i cant control
    something that i cant hold
    something i have know has hold of me

    the need of wanting
    the need of having
    the need of desire
    like fire in my veins

    a feeling i cant shake
    a felling i can't explain.
    i know i should stop
    i know i will get caught
    but this has hold of me
    this has hold of everything i do

    knowing i have lost all will power
    to control such a urge that i have
    no control over. it has me
    it has my arms, my legs, it has...me

    from killing to get it
    to raping to get it.
    this addiction is too strong
    this addiction has gone on for to long
    my will power is long gone.
    im addicted.


    i was bored so i wrote this

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    Re: addiction

    Nice poem, I wonder what it's based on b_b but still, nice use of words and emotions. Great job! ^_^

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    Re: addiction

    oooh so pretty, i love it, you should do more like that

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    Re: addiction

    thank you thank you so much. i waz about tired of all these love and emo poems. but i think everyone can relate to it in a way.

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    Re: addiction

    nice poem..
    i like it..
    keep up the good work:-)

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    That was an interesting poem, keep em coming ^_^ I thought it sums up what a lot of people are like in real life.

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    Re: addiction

    I agree with Rave. Its a cool poem although I don't know what its based on, if you said what it was I didn't read the other comments so yeah. But still I like it. Keep it up
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    Re: addiction

    it waz just a poem about something that you cant shake. nothing to do with me

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