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Reply With QuoteI really like how the flow of the poem goes along with what your saying. I think this is well written despite being slightly repetitive. (Imo)
Cast off, set sail
and just ride the waves.
Nobody ever just goes
with the flow these days.
Let your mind be free
and fly with the wind.
There's no need to be
wondering where to begin.
If you hate to be alone
then bring a few friends.
Then you don't have to
struggle all the way to the end.
Now face toward the sea,
let your thoughts shift.
Let the boat guide itself
and your mind be adrift.
I really like how the flow of the poem goes along with what your saying. I think this is well written despite being slightly repetitive. (Imo)
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
atomik_sprout (Feb 15, 2008)
Yeah, I tried to fix the repitition, but failed miserably. I'm still happy with this poem though. I haven't written much lately and I'm still trying to over come my writer's block--concerning my fanfic--so I'm quite proud of this one and 'Numbers'.Originally Posted by bratling
Well I'm proud of all your writing and I don't think fanfic writers block should stop you from writing other things.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
It usually does though. Just like when I draw one thing and get blocked, I can't draw anything else for the rest of the day until I unblock myself on my original project. My mind is difficult like that. If I could change it, I would. Then writer's/artist's block wouldn't be any problem for me. LOL.Well I'm proud of all your writing and I don't think fanfic writers block should stop you from writing other things.
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