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Adventure
Never did he expect this
"How could it happen to me?"
He would ask himself
His mother died when he was only 3
And now his father is no where to be seen
It took only hours
To know it was time
To leave it all behind
And start a new life
He took my hand
And we went on this journey
Everything was new
All that was missing
Was somewhere to go
A goal to acheive
A land to discover
I walked with this person
We ventured everywhere
It wouldn't matter if we failed
As long I as I was with him
Walking side by side
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Re: Adventure
I'm surprised no one else has commented on this. I really liked it. Short and sweet. You know, you could make a story in poem form if you made that one longer. That would be really cool. I did that once, turned out very good. Well, I thought it was very good. Keep it up!
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Re: Adventure
Another ballad in the making!!! It's quite good...do better next time...