Adventure

Star Girl · Sep 01, 2006, 09:05 PM

Never did he expect this
"How could it happen to me?"
He would ask himself
His mother died when he was only 3
And now his father is no where to be seen
It took only hours
To know it was time
To leave it all behind
And start a new life
He took my hand
And we went on this journey
Everything was new
All that was missing
Was somewhere to go
A goal to acheive
A land to discover
I walked with this person
We ventured everywhere
It wouldn't matter if we failed
As long I as I was with him
Walking side by side

Sincere · Sep 02, 2006, 12:34 PM

I'm surprised no one else has commented on this. I really liked it. Short and sweet. You know, you could make a story in poem form if you made that one longer. That would be really cool. I did that once, turned out very good. Well, I thought it was very good. Keep it up!

Pride_Edward · Sep 04, 2006, 04:16 AM

Another ballad in the making!!! It's quite good...do better next time...

Sep 01, 2006, 09:05 PM	#1 (permalink)
Star Girl Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Terabithia Posts: 169 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 273	Adventure Never did he expect this "How could it happen to me?" He would ask himself His mother died when he was only 3 And now his father is no where to be seen It took only hours To know it was time To leave it all behind And start a new life He took my hand And we went on this journey Everything was new All that was missing Was somewhere to go A goal to acheive A land to discover I walked with this person We ventured everywhere It wouldn't matter if we failed As long I as I was with him Walking side by side __________________
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Sep 02, 2006, 12:34 PM	#2 (permalink)
Sincere Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart Posts: 307 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 364	Re: Adventure I'm surprised no one else has commented on this. I really liked it. Short and sweet. You know, you could make a story in poem form if you made that one longer. That would be really cool. I did that once, turned out very good. Well, I thought it was very good. Keep it up! __________________ $C:\Documents and Settings\Julia\My Documents\My Pictures\Siggy.jpg$ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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Pride_Edward Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 247 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Adventure Another ballad in the making!!! It's quite good...do better next time... __________________ Our own site: http://www.fma-adikz.tk
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