Affection across distant

Shippo101 · Apr 06, 2007, 09:30 PM

I wish I could just hold you,
But the distant kills me.
That your sweet smile I can not see,
Yes….It kills me.

I try so hard to make you smile,
And to ease most of your pain.
But yet it feels like Satan is playing,
A cruel cruel game.

You told me all of your secrets,
And asked for nothing in return.
But it kills me to think,
A little pain it has strum.

You ease away all my disrupting thoughts,
And make me smile wide.
But we know we may never see that,
We know this deep deep inside.

I wish I had one wish,
And it would be so simple.
For you and I to be held so tight,
In a fashion that is lovable.

I see we are a mix match pair,
Your night and I day.
You caring, and I pure evil,
Honestly what more can I say.

I know and you as well know,
I can’t ease all your pain.
Affections across distance,
What a cruel cruel game.

*Rave_Grip* · Apr 06, 2007, 10:22 PM

It has left me speechless. But it's a really touching poem, not to mention it states everything you think. Very good work.

AngelFlow · Apr 06, 2007, 11:17 PM

Its such a sweet poem, one of the good ones I've read so far. Good job!

West_King · Apr 10, 2007, 06:39 AM

That was a good poem, it all so left me speechless, i liked it alot, alil sad, yet i hope to hear more.

Tbaism · Apr 10, 2007, 06:54 AM

Makes me think of past relationships. Long distance, emotionally unavailable...

"Sigh" good stuff but am about to explode from the memories you have now piled back ontop of me.

Kepp up the work
<.< >.> wheres my hammer, feel like destroying something

elie26 · Apr 11, 2007, 01:10 AM

lol, tbaism

Well it does brings back memories, im sure most of us here do. The poem was sad but somehow rather sweet, cuz u would wish only to be with her/him. I think it relates to alot of us. Good job. It really got to me.

Apr 06, 2007, 09:30 PM	#1 (permalink)
Shippo101 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana Posts: 220 Thanks: 11 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,831	Affection across distant I wish I could just hold you, But the distant kills me. That your sweet smile I can not see, Yes….It kills me. I try so hard to make you smile, And to ease most of your pain. But yet it feels like Satan is playing, A cruel cruel game. You told me all of your secrets, And asked for nothing in return. But it kills me to think, A little pain it has strum. You ease away all my disrupting thoughts, And make me smile wide. But we know we may never see that, We know this deep deep inside. I wish I had one wish, And it would be so simple. For you and I to be held so tight, In a fashion that is lovable. I see we are a mix match pair, Your night and I day. You caring, and I pure evil, Honestly what more can I say. I know and you as well know, I can’t ease all your pain. Affections across distance, What a cruel cruel game. __________________ The heavens laugh at our foolish deed and the greed we exceed Last edited by Shippo101; Apr 06, 2007 at 09:47 PM.
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Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,311 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 13,590	Re: Affection across distant It has left me speechless. But it's a really touching poem, not to mention it states everything you think. Very good work. __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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AngelFlow Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Home Posts: 141 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 976	Re: Affection across distant Its such a sweet poem, one of the good ones I've read so far. Good job!
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West_King Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: The D Posts: 27 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 165	Re: Affection across distant That was a good poem, it all so left me speechless, i liked it alot, alil sad, yet i hope to hear more. __________________
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Tbaism Upcoming Legend Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 624 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,816	Re: Affection across distant Makes me think of past relationships. Long distance, emotionally unavailable... "Sigh" good stuff but am about to explode from the memories you have now piled back ontop of me. Kepp up the work <.< >.> wheres my hammer, feel like destroying something
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Apr 11, 2007, 01:10 AM	#6 (permalink)
elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 294	Re: Affection across distant lol, tbaism Well it does brings back memories, im sure most of us here do. The poem was sad but somehow rather sweet, cuz u would wish only to be with her/him. I think it relates to alot of us. Good job. It really got to me.
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