It has left me speechless. But it's a really touching poem, not to mention it states everything you think. Very good work.
I wish I could just hold you,
But the distant kills me.
That your sweet smile I can not see,
Yes….It kills me.
I try so hard to make you smile,
And to ease most of your pain.
But yet it feels like Satan is playing,
A cruel cruel game.
You told me all of your secrets,
And asked for nothing in return.
But it kills me to think,
A little pain it has strum.
You ease away all my disrupting thoughts,
And make me smile wide.
But we know we may never see that,
We know this deep deep inside.
I wish I had one wish,
And it would be so simple.
For you and I to be held so tight,
In a fashion that is lovable.
I see we are a mix match pair,
Your night and I day.
You caring, and I pure evil,
Honestly what more can I say.
I know and you as well know,
I can’t ease all your pain.
Affections across distance,
What a cruel cruel game.
Last edited by Shippo101; Apr 06, 2007 at 09:47 PM.
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It has left me speechless. But it's a really touching poem, not to mention it states everything you think. Very good work.
Its such a sweet poem, one of the good ones I've read so far. Good job!
That was a good poem, it all so left me speechless, i liked it alot, alil sad, yet i hope to hear more.
Makes me think of past relationships. Long distance, emotionally unavailable...
"Sigh" good stuff but am about to explode from the memories you have now piled back ontop of me.
Kepp up the work
<.< >.> wheres my hammer, feel like destroying something
lol, tbaism
Well it does brings back memories, im sure most of us here do. The poem was sad but somehow rather sweet, cuz u would wish only to be with her/him. I think it relates to alot of us. Good job. It really got to me.![]()
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