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    byakugan Barn Break Champion, Dino Rennen Champion, Block Buster Champion, Portal Champion, Quick Brick Champion cantsenditback is off to a good start cantsenditback's Avatar
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    afraid

    Why am I so afraid of who I will become?
    Why am I so scared of what I was?
    Why am I so calm of who I am right now?
    Who I am now is unknown to others
    What I become is other people nightmare
    Who I was, was my own nightmare
    Who I am now is unknown!
    Would this world be better if I'm gone?
    Would I become a better person if I am gone?
    I was in danger, before, now it is calm.
    The person I will become will put other in danger
    Why can't I become the man people are happy with.
    I just want to know two things.

    Who Am I?

    Are you afraid of me and what i will become?
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    Re: afride

    It is a pretty good poem man, i like the question you left at the end of the poem ^^. I don't like to be picky about people's grammar, but should not be "afraid" instead of "afride"?

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    Re: afraid

    it was honestly alright
    i didnt like the repetitiveness with the why/who/whats

    that could have been a bit more creative.
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