After the bombs stop falling

**atomik_sprout** · Nov 06, 2007 09:06 AM

Originally Posted by bratling

Well it's very worth being proud of. Your a fantastic writer and this just displays that so well. I kinda feel like it goes really well with my fork in the road one. But I make really odd connections in my mind.

When i was a teenager and writing poetry. I did it all in AOL mail and formatted and colored and backgrounded it all. So that the LOOK of it had as much to do with the message as the words did. That's what this reminded me of. I'm really fond of the use of color for emphisis. Because colors add such different meaning to things then words can.

I agree, that's why I've been using colors alot lately. I like to use different shades of green for quotes, my thoughts and my pissy tones. And other colors usually fit moods and such.

**highteckdudu** · Nov 06, 2007 11:00 AM

Great job once again!! keep it up as always! wow! *tear*

**!Mini Dev** · Nov 06, 2007 11:25 AM

what bombs there arent any round bye bye animeonline i only posted to get into the arcade lol owned!

**atomik_sprout** · Nov 06, 2007 12:17 PM

Originally Posted by highteckdudu

Great job once again!! keep it up as always! wow! *tear*

As always, thank you for your comment and taking time to read my work! ^_^

Originally Posted by Mini Dev

what bombs there arent any round bye bye animeonline i only posted to get into the arcade lol owned!

Yeah, well the next time you wanna waste time to make a random, thoughtless post; do it in a random, thoughtless thread!!! Don't taint my work and comment space for your garbage! Thanks for reading though! ^_^

**Ichigo_06** · Nov 06, 2007 01:16 PM

Sprout I agree with everyone but mainly with asaroth because she has a really good point. However I must point out that these bombs you speek of are not explosive (to me) they are actually tears, tears that have been held back for so long and are finally geting the chance to apear. Good job though man you are a much better writer tha I can be. Keep pouring out your emotions onto paper instead of.....
Damn sorry got rambling anyways keep up the good work.

**atomik_sprout** · Nov 06, 2007 01:52 PM

Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

Sprout I agree with everyone but mainly with asaroth because she has a really good point. However I must point out that these bombs you speek of are not explosive (to me) they are actually tears, tears that have been held back for so long and are finally geting the chance to apear. Good job though man you are a much better writer tha I can be. Keep pouring out your emotions onto paper instead of.....
Damn sorry got rambling anyways keep up the good work.

Thanks, Ichigo! I'm glad you liked my poem! It's not everyday that I get to hear from ya, so it makes me happy to know that you take time to read my work. ^_^

**Shippo101** · Nov 06, 2007 02:33 PM

Awww i love it, its so sad, it was great tho the feeling was limitless

**bratling** · Nov 06, 2007 09:05 PM

Look nerdling.. You know you use green cus your the Sprout. And because greens your favorite color. Just admit it and be cool like. Me. *cough.* Where'd that come from?

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