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  1. Mar 07, 2009 10:32 PM #1
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    After Humanity

    The tide of sea rises high then goes low.
    For millions of years rivers keep their flow.
    The deserts are home to mounds of beige sand.
    Mountains have stuck for centuries from the land.
    A breeze blows from the sea towards the bay.
    And the planet shall always be this way.
    The rainforest is thick with life and trees.
    Volcanoes burst in thousands of degrees.
    Earth’s plates shift and the ground constantly moves.
    The world shakes and land collapses in grooves.
    If it was this way before humans came,
    If we do not exist it stays the same.
    Earth’s spin causes night and brings forth the day.
    And the planet shall always be this way.
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    Re: After Humanity

    Really good job Beast ^^ sounds really good and great flow, looks like you got skills maybe you should try and challenge yourself, maybe that is
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    Re: After Humanity

    HEY...>>>
    Beast you are really good poet...>>>
    Nice expressions and Keep it up..>>
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: After Humanity

    Aleu... Is this your wish, beast? *thinking* I can imagine how life is going to be with me around there lol Interesting. . . Your point of view about life in this kind of way is, a bit like you know, you watch movies a lot.. lol But hey,well expressed- except I don't feel His presence. A world without life... I mean, make it more colourful, drag me into your adventures.. Tell me more. One more advise, read more and write more to express your feelings in poems... That'll help, believe me.
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.
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    Re: After Humanity

    VERY NICE!! I like the whole environmental theme. It's hard to believe someone put this together. Good flow and great rhyming! Keep it up!

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