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After Life
After all life is gone light shall remain,
And in this light life shall flluroush again.
Within this new life time shall be granted,
When time is granted life will be expanding rapidly again,
To the reaches of the solar system and,
within the outer reaches of the solar system, new life shall be found,
With the new found life humans will grow again to its formal power.
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Re: After Life
Oh Wow!!!! This poem is so you can say catchy. It's like you'll always enjoy reading it and reading it again. Thats what I love about it. Hope to see more!:D:
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Re: After Life
Thank you KUWI. I will try and post some more some time.
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Re: After Life
nice interpretation of the circle of life...kinda catchy.definatly cool its like the lion king meets sci-fi.ya know?keep it up.
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Re: After Life
thank you I will and I am glad to here that some of my work is appreciated thank you guys.
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Re: After Life
oh, I'm not the only person thinking about the end of the world as we know it and the future of humanity after all! :D
I liked this poem very much, it only made me a little bit confused, but maybe that's not because of the poem... :D
Good work Ichigo!
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Re: After Life
Thank you Lasura I appreciate your feedback. I really do I like to here what others think and I am glad some people like it.
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Re: After Life
grr i want to be as good as you lol i really like this one its umm diffrent =D