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    The Aftermath

    so silent a night,
    so calm the hour.....
    yet night is still seeking,
    for a soul to devour
    blood on my lip
    nice and sour
    He lay on the floor dead
    bloody coward
    one bullet straight to the head.
    my enemy is gone
    so long,
    not much left
    just the scent of death
    blood on my breath
    I am the night
    seeking my fight
    still....
    so silent a night
    so calm the hour.....
    yet night is still seeking,
    for a soul to devour
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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    Re: The Aftermath

    very dark and poetic i like this and the
    stalking idea you portray here is pretty cool
    greaT poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Aftermath

    I'd like to see breaks.
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    Re: The Aftermath

    sweet dark poem man, i see that after your break up you have become a dark poet writter. keep it up man.

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    Re: The Aftermath

    Another good one I have read by you! You seem to excel in the dark stuff, so keep it up!
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    I know who's heart it is to represent
    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
    For he's the one that's heaven sent. :
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    great job...........keep it up and i cant wait till the next one comes out...........if another one does come out
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    Re: The Aftermath

    Well look around for more of my poems n.n and enjoy them, thanx all of you n.n
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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