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    again with this?

    THIS IS A TRUE YET HARSH POEM TO ALL THE PEOPLE WHO CANT MOVE ON!!!! I AM NOT INTENDING TO HURT ANYONE, IT'S JUST A POEM THAT I MADE UP FOR ALL HE PEOPLE I KNOW AND I SEE WHO NEED TO GET THERI LIFE BACK AND TOP BEING SO EMO!! GOD!!!!

    you fell in love and now it's all said and done.
    you two broke up and now it's time to move on.
    i know it's Hard but try and go find someone.
    move on, move on, it's more guys/girls where he/she came from.


    i am sick of your crying, sick of your tears
    your too goddamn young to be crying over some guy/girl you met at sears.
    dammit get over it, it's been two months. how much spanish soap operas can you watch?
    it's annoying to hear you bash your ex like the way you do.
    it's annoyig to hear you say you'll find someone new.
    but did you?..........NO!! YOUR STILL FREAKING CRYING!


    you wanna know what i think?
    i think you should move on, get on with your life.
    your too young to be pigging out on ice-cream late at night.
    think of youurself as halle berry or leonardo decaprio
    two of the hottest people i know.
    get on, move on, before i kick you out the door.
    oppurtunity is knocking on your front door.

    sorry for being so mean and harsh, but i got a date in 5 and your sittting on my GUCCI scarf.


    my poem about movin on.

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    Re: again with this?

    I fell the same how they are like I still love him or her well you did you know why you broke up he wasnt right for you


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    Re: again with this?

    This poem reminds me of how some of my ex-boyfriends couldn't get the hint and move on after I told them so many times to get lost. It told the story of how some people just can't let go. I look forward to reading more.
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    thank you al for the comments. i made this becuz i am tired of all this drama and lovesick when most people are too young to experience true love

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    lol funny in a way hahaha i laughed when i saw this poem haha seems liek your annoyed with this eh? phew im hapy i didnt make any poems like that

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    Re: again with this?

    Absolutely perfect! This poem couldn't have been written any better! Any person who can't seem to move on should read this poem and take a hint! Excellent job on this poem princesslady!

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    Re: again with this?

    1.
    It is better to have loved and lost than never to have lost at all.
    2.
    Love seeketh not itself to please, nor for itself hath any care, but for another gives its ease, and builds a Heaven in Hell's despair.
    3.
    Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish its source. It dies of blindness and errors and betrayals. It dies of illness and wounds; it dies of weariness, of withering, of tarnishing
    hope you love it

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    Wow, correct punctation and capitalization would have made me take this poem more seriously.
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