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    Arrow Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    You broke my heart like a glass falling on the floor
    Shattered into pieces,
    With almost no hope to recover
    I “thought” you knew my feelings

    Oh how can I forget the times we had,
    The precious moments we spent together
    Your warms hugs
    Your gentle smiles

    Your sweet kisses, your blissful presence,
    I forgave you many a time when you broke my heart
    It was because I loved you
    I adored you
    I idolized you. I really did love you

    Now as I cry silently without letting you hear or see,
    As you are with the same person again
    Whom you really didn’t love
    My eyes sore and red

    What’s in me that couldn’t keep you fullfiled?
    I’m writing this poem while crying and grieving,
    Watching you go with him,
    Not like I already had enough pain and loss in my life

    You really do know how to break my heart don’t you!
    I believed you when you said you “loved” me!
    I never knew you’d play with me like that!
    Why did you even let me fall in love with you!

    Go away and leave me alone
    Go away and live peacefully with him
    Go away and make him yours
    As if he loved you when he dumped you

    You’ll never imagine what I’m going through,
    How my heart burns with agony,
    How much I feel crushed,
    How much you hurt me ...

    I want to cry,
    I want to grieve,
    I want to sob-
    Till I die ...

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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    thats was beautiful and heartfelt my only question.......... who 4?
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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    all love poems huh rave? well keep it up i cant go against that, good work

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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    Roku> very deep. i like it.
    Dai> whats with all the sad poems tho, arn't there happy people out there?
    Roku> you idiot this is supposed to be a sad poem.
    Dai> i know that, but most of these are sad.
    Roku> *sighs* nvm dai.
    Dai> anyways, nice poem.
    Thanks alot Aiora from both of us

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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    *looks down* Its so pretty. i like it
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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    oh my god, it's so beautiful!!! I love it! Keep it up! =) It's a very sad poem.
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    online dating isnt real, therefore i do not enjoy reading this poem

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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    This has nothing to do with me shu so yea~ Its just a poem~
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