Agony, pian ... a broken heart

*Rave_Grip* · Sep 18, 2006, 05:17 AM

You broke my heart like a glass falling on the floor
Shattered into pieces,
With almost no hope to recover
I “thought” you knew my feelings

Oh how can I forget the times we had,
The precious moments we spent together
Your warms hugs
Your gentle smiles

Your sweet kisses, your blissful presence,
I forgave you many a time when you broke my heart
It was because I loved you
I adored you
I idolized you. I really did love you

Now as I cry silently without letting you hear or see,
As you are with the same person again
Whom you really didn’t love
My eyes sore and red

What’s in me that couldn’t keep you fullfiled?
I’m writing this poem while crying and grieving,
Watching you go with him,
Not like I already had enough pain and loss in my life

You really do know how to break my heart don’t you!
I believed you when you said you “loved” me!
I never knew you’d play with me like that!
Why did you even let me fall in love with you!

Go away and leave me alone
Go away and live peacefully with him
Go away and make him yours
As if he loved you when he dumped you

You’ll never imagine what I’m going through,
How my heart burns with agony,
How much I feel crushed,
How much you hurt me ...

I want to cry,
I want to grieve,
I want to sob-
Till I die ...

Shippo101 · Sep 18, 2006, 06:39 AM

thats was beautiful and heartfelt my only question.......... who 4?
Crying never solves nothin

*hellknight* · Sep 18, 2006, 07:04 AM

all love poems huh rave? well keep it up i cant go against that, good work

TroubleXTwins_DaiXRoku · Sep 18, 2006, 09:19 AM

Roku> very deep. i like it.
Dai> whats with all the sad poems tho, arn't there happy people out there?
Roku> you idiot this is supposed to be a sad poem.
Dai> i know that, but most of these are sad.
Roku> *sighs* nvm dai.
Dai> anyways, nice poem.

HieisLove · Sep 18, 2006, 09:26 AM

*looks down* Its so pretty. i like it

For3v3r_Lost · Sep 18, 2006, 01:33 PM

oh my god, it's so beautiful!!! I love it! Keep it up! =) It's a very sad poem.

Shu · Sep 18, 2006, 01:45 PM

online dating isnt real, therefore i do not enjoy reading this poem

*Mr. K* · Sep 18, 2006, 11:58 PM

This has nothing to do with me shu so yea~ Its just a poem~

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 19, 2006, 04:44 AM

very cool way to express hwo you was used ber her and never really loved by her at all,and yea its online ad everything wich i think is bad t begine with , but to'
not care for someone like she never did you is pretty bad, and i got this from you
the pain the hurt ,its everything you get from love ,you just fell on thw wrong side of it, everyone does from time to time just learn from this and make sure you dont get hurt by another like her who never really loves anyone and dosnt care for anyone at all.
ps nothing but a view about this poem and what i get from it not meant
in anyother way incase a mod reads this .

Hassun · Sep 19, 2006, 01:48 PM

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Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23

*sigh* Looks like Rave is gonna have to use his Grip more.....waitaminnit.............................. .......XD!!!!!! Soap opera type poems always amuse me!! Tough luck, man!........I can E-mail you hentai if you need it bad enough....PFFTT HA HA HA!!! AW MAAAN!! I AM IN AN EVIL,EVIL MOOD.........

I couldn't care less about which mood you are in.

KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR · Sep 19, 2006, 01:52 PM

I really liked it, i can tell that this are real and deep emotions, you express yourself very well. Nice work!
And it kinda made me sad.. which is good!

Sep 18, 2006, 05:17 AM	#1 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,832	Agony, pian ... a broken heart You broke my heart like a glass falling on the floor Shattered into pieces, With almost no hope to recover I “thought” you knew my feelings Oh how can I forget the times we had, The precious moments we spent together Your warms hugs Your gentle smiles Your sweet kisses, your blissful presence, I forgave you many a time when you broke my heart It was because I loved you I adored you I idolized you. I really did love you Now as I cry silently without letting you hear or see, As you are with the same person again Whom you really didn’t love My eyes sore and red What’s in me that couldn’t keep you fullfiled? I’m writing this poem while crying and grieving, Watching you go with him, Not like I already had enough pain and loss in my life You really do know how to break my heart don’t you! I believed you when you said you “loved” me! I never knew you’d play with me like that! Why did you even let me fall in love with you! Go away and leave me alone Go away and live peacefully with him Go away and make him yours As if he loved you when he dumped you You’ll never imagine what I’m going through, How my heart burns with agony, How much I feel crushed, How much you hurt me ... I want to cry, I want to grieve, I want to sob- Till I die ... __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \| Last edited by Rave_Grip; Sep 18, 2006 at 05:19 AM.
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Shippo101 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana Posts: 220 Thanks: 11 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 4,246	Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart thats was beautiful and heartfelt my only question.......... who 4? Crying never solves nothin __________________ The heavens laugh at our foolish deed and the greed we exceed
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TroubleXTwins_DaiXRoku Newbie Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 14 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 60	Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart Roku> very deep. i like it. Dai> whats with all the sad poems tho, arn't there happy people out there? Roku> you idiot this is supposed to be a sad poem. Dai> i know that, but most of these are sad. Roku> sighs nvm dai. Dai> anyways, nice poem. __________________ Thanks alot Aiora from both of us
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For3v3r_Lost Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: My own little world Posts: 249 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 410	Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart oh my god, it's so beautiful!!! I love it! Keep it up! =) It's a very sad poem. __________________ .:\|Myspace Profile\|.:.\|My Forum\|.:.\|My AO Gallery\|.:.\|My December\|:. "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,203	Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart This has nothing to do with me shu so yea~ Its just a poem~ __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,202	Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart very cool way to express hwo you was used ber her and never really loved by her at all,and yea its online ad everything wich i think is bad t begine with , but to' not care for someone like she never did you is pretty bad, and i got this from you the pain the hurt ,its everything you get from love ,you just fell on thw wrong side of it, everyone does from time to time just learn from this and make sure you dont get hurt by another like her who never really loves anyone and dosnt care for anyone at all. ps nothing but a view about this poem and what i get from it not meant in anyother way incase a mod reads this . __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: somewhere in between dreams Posts: 108 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart I really liked it, i can tell that this are real and deep emotions, you express yourself very well. Nice work! And it kinda made me sad.. which is good! __________________ Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (: Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
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