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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    very cool way to express hwo you was used ber her and never really loved by her at all,and yea its online ad everything wich i think is bad t begine with , but to'
    not care for someone like she never did you is pretty bad, and i got this from you
    the pain the hurt ,its everything you get from love ,you just fell on thw wrong side of it, everyone does from time to time just learn from this and make sure you dont get hurt by another like her who never really loves anyone and dosnt care for anyone at all.
    ps nothing but a view about this poem and what i get from it not meant
    in anyother way incase a mod reads this .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23 View Post
    *sigh* Looks like Rave is gonna have to use his Grip more.....waitaminnit.............................. .......XD!!!!!! Soap opera type poems always amuse me!! Tough luck, man!........I can E-mail you hentai if you need it bad enough....PFFTT HA HA HA!!! AW MAAAN!! I AM IN AN EVIL,EVIL MOOD.........
    I couldn't care less about which mood you are in.

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    Re: Agony, pian ... a broken heart

    I really liked it, i can tell that this are real and deep emotions, you express yourself very well. Nice work!
    And it kinda made me sad.. which is good!
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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