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    All I could ever ask for.

    Stranded in the hood all day with you
    gave me an opportunity to have you to myself.
    It gave me a chance to show you how much
    I care about you and want you at my side.

    Stuck in the Northside and for the first
    time in my life, I had no issues with it.
    No worry, no thoughts of the evils that lurk
    around there all day, just thoughts of you and I.

    Thinking of the endless possiblilities.
    Day dreaming about the future we could share.
    Seeing your smile, and hearing your laughter;
    it's what kept me in such high spirits.

    Hearing my friends say that you should come
    back was like hearing God say, "Let there be
    light." I never expected them to choose a side
    or to say anything to go against their other "friend".

    Even though we didn't do much, it was the
    best time I've had in a long while now. I
    smile and thank my friends for being there for me,
    even though I'm not always around, and I thank God
    for putting you in my life.

    Even though we've had hard times, I still love you
    and you love me. That's all I could ever ask for...


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    Re: All I could ever ask for.

    Some poem comenters seem to have had a bad day if they haven't commented on this piece of art!!!! But that's fine for me- it's all my honour to be the first to leve my mark by this poem...

    This is really, really nice... you can feel the love shining through... It almost made me cry, but it was too good to cry about... You've done a great work here and whoever you wrote this too... is so damn lucky ^^

    I really enjoyed reading this and I hope to see more ^^ Hugs!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: All I could ever ask for.

    Now this is one poem I absolutely love <3

    It was well written and the content of this poem just seems to flow smoothly.

    I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the amazing work! xD

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    Re: All I could ever ask for.

    "Thinking of the endless possiblilities.
    Day dreaming about the future we could share.
    Seeing your smile, and hearing your laughter;
    it's what kept me in such high spirits."

    this is how my status is like now..

    nice description...the poem was nicely written indeed... good job..

    a sweet 1..

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    Re: All I could ever ask for.

    *Big smile* Thanks you guys! I was beginning to think no one really liked this poem. ^_^

    I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on this one. It took me two hours to write this, so when I seen that nobody really commented on it, I was kinda dissapointed. But I guess someone really DOES like it! LOL.


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    Re: All I could ever ask for.

    I -know- I'm lucky. And I didn't comment on this before because like I told you, I really didn't know what to say. But now that I feel at least different. Not better or worse just in a different place. I can look at it objectively and tell you that it's FANTASTICALLY written. You can feel every word. And even through the words, between them. It just radiated your message and it touched me very much. Thank -you-.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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