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    All You Need

    Looking into the eye of a death goddess
    So frozen in love and fear, serene and crystal
    A cool auburn glance staring needles at me
    A heart made of iron and warm like winter breaks

    My old dawn and dusk walk away
    And all I can do is stand there like the last, numb
    Staring down my deflated sunset with regret
    Cold feelings run along my spine, my mind explodes

    So many mistakes were made and breakthrough too
    It was all just a dare to get close enough to touch
    But the surface was made of glue
    And the rest was all allure

    A desired dream turned into a waking fantasy
    Such a sinister elegance can only be claimed by the viper
    Bravado is a terrible thing when the heady scent is about
    A pungent smell under the guise of roses

    My heart too is fragile and broken
    The Goddess alone is not the only to feel pain
    Love is like a butterfly and should never be trusted
    It will soon flit away to a prettier flower

    Sick spindles of doubt and dread etch in her mind
    Clashing against the love she still holds close
    Leering into lost ocean eyes
    But then she walks, finished with this gamble

    Her sunrise lost to the darkness of the west
    A clashing tango of light and dark
    Her false envy brought to life by society
    Worlds full of anxiety and worry made to distort

    What is there to keep faith in when fate is a bitch
    Giving you a second of love in exchange for this grief
    Taking away the fireworks when the show just began
    Drawing its line before the half way point

    Telling herself it was real not just a delusion
    Wondering about the cold jungle of concrete and ceramic
    Bumbling about the innocence of newborns
    When those lost eyes look into hers

    How funny the game of love can get
    But in the end all you need will always be there before you
    Starring back with their own special eyes
    Your very own sunset and sunrise.

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    Yeha, a poem.. (Finally eh?)

    I really wanted to write a poem today cause I was with Rich driving people about the city. There was this Hippi person, a gobbly biker lady and a whole slew of other types of people and I though just how different people are, and how diverse my city is. It's wonderful.

    I don't know I pulled this one out though, I wanted to write about people and differences, not love lost and found again... neh, whatever.

    Enjoy the thing or death!
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: All You Need

    Woah. This poem meant something to me, that I know it didn't mean to you.
    Because in the end, you said "How funny the game of love can get
    But in the end all you need will always be there before you
    Starring back with their own special eyes
    Your very own sunset and sunrise."

    I thought about my 2 boys like sunset and sunrise.

    Anyway... maybe this poem is sort of about the differnces in people still. You've put so much complex imagery and emotion in it. That every reader will precieve it quite differently (I'd imagine).
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: All You Need

    I read this poem, holding my breath... I just love the way you wrote this... I must say I saw this poem in a different light- this is a poem that can be interpreted in very many ways, but I think that is a great thing...

    I was really glad when I saw that you've written this poem and I will be looking forward for more... You're doing a great work... I just feel so jelous ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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