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    Fallen Angel PhoenixSara may be famous one day PhoenixSara's Avatar
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    Down the aisle, she dreamed so long.
    To hear someone sing that simple song.
    She was hoping somehow that someone would stay.
    When she smiled he turned away.

    The darkness fell, the wind just came.
    The rain started pouring and turned into hale.
    She cried as she slowly knelt to the ground;
    Asking how things could go suddenly wrong.

    Will she always be broken like this?
    Will her heart be always stolen by a kiss?
    Will she ever know what love really is?
    Or will she forever wander alone in the abyss?

    The darkness never left, then someone came.
    Someone who knew what love is and pain.
    He said he would stay and never leave.
    Yet her heart is now cold never to be held by him.

    Will she be searching forever again?
    Will she be alone until no one knows when;
    Will she ever be someone's special heart.
    Will she always just be almost there but not really his.
    "In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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    You have a wonderful talent. i loved ur poem
    Michi naru seki no yume kara mezamete

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    Re: Almost

    That was amazing, it took my breath away, You've got amazing talent.

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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    Otaku Inuruto is off to a good start Inuruto's Avatar
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    Re: Almost

    The repercussions of love... I must say that I can relate, from "my heart being stolen from the first kiss" to the "heart is now cold"... You can't love without there being a chance of being hurt... Hell I think that goes hand and hand with matters of the heart... I have my views on love, but I love to see yours in writing... Keep it up.

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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