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    Almost Made Love

    I feel your soft kisses.
    On my collar bone.
    Lips touching. Hearts pounding.
    Cant leave you alone.

    Touch me slowly. Then faster.
    You know I want you to take it.
    Perhaps I'll never find love.
    Until Im ready to make it.

    You can see I've been trapped.
    When you look in my eyes.
    I let him go when you hold me.
    My past slowly dies.

    I feel your breath on my neck.
    Having you now, is a must.
    That tingle in my spine.
    Induces my trust.

    Though I can not decipher.
    How long you're gonna be there.
    Im wrapped up in the motions
    of you pulling my hair.

    And as we're pulling and tugging.
    On eachothers clothing.
    Im distracted by the smallest,
    little bit of self loathing.

    When I thought we'd have fun.
    That I would just let you win.
    I ruined the mood.
    just by thinking of him.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Almost Made Love

    Well that had to suck. But you probably got some good memories right? Great poem by the way. Makes you long for someone of your own if you don't have someone.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Almost Made Love

    Quote Originally Posted by NevesElocin View Post
    Well that had to suck. But you probably got some good memories right? Great poem by the way. Makes you long for someone of your own if you don't have someone.
    Yeah... it does suck when i feel i cant get anywhere because of walls that ~I~ put up.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Almost Made Love

    (Sigh) That really does suck but it still show how much you care for that one person and thats so great about it to me! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Almost Made Love

    love that lets you forget a moments worry and a few
    lingering thoughts of a past better to have never been
    made to begin with is something that everyone regrets,
    but its how you let the mood change from that touch you
    linger for to a past where a similar touch seems just as nice
    with out really thinking.

    this pome is a reminder of how love can confound even
    the best of intentions there's really no way to stop this
    life really never gives you what you want and it leaves
    you with phantoms you wish would go away but they don't.

    i cant tell you how to avoid this from happening
    from now on but try and live in the moment forget
    the things that mean nothing to you right now thats
    the best way and dont let how you think people will
    see you affect you either becuase the only you and who
    you are with are whats important.

    very awesome poem i love this one
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Almost Made Love

    Let him go, baby girl!

    Just let him go.

    Sensuality, sadness, depression, anger, excitement.. all thought out into such a poem.

    Great job, peach.
    Last edited by The White Wolf; May 26, 2007 at 07:49 PM.

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    Re: Almost Made Love

    This poem was very sensual/interesting. I liked it, but sorry if that actually happened
    Good poem though...keep writing.
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Almost Made Love

    Aw! The last line! Lol.. well too bad .. this is one is nice.. tho i can still see it's still.. somewhat bout him ._. But as long as it gets all the feelings out.. u go girl

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