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Alone
I look around
Surrounded by four walls
With a one way door
No was of getting out
Only some people
They stay for ages
I watch them die
Sorrow fills my soul
I look around
Searching for something
Anything to help
Kill the pain
I feel deep down
Walking around
Going crazy slowly
Something is also here
I feel it in my bones
Trying to tell me something
Looking over the room
I notice something
A pillow and a blanket
I go over and hide my self
Trying to get read of the pain
Make it stop
Suddenly
Everything stops
It all fades away
Then I wake up
I felt that before
Like everything left me
The feeling is so familiar
I felt last night
And the night before
For the past 6 months
I felt it so many times
Trapped in a cycle
I can't get free
Then
As I lower my head
I look at the floor
To me lying there
Still, not moving at all
But I look different
My skin is a different colour
But i am wrapped
In the Blanket thats old
A sinking feeling fills me
I realize I'm alone
No one to talk to
Left her to die
Until another day arrives.
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Sorry its a long one but i felt it was best to present in this way.
Please comment about it!!
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Re: Alone
I really like it! It's kinda like a story...a sad story. A few spelling mistakes but it's still really good!
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Re: Alone
Obviously, with the mispells, i guessed u typed this long one directly, haha...good work..
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Re: Alone
apparently there was only a few mistakes.
If i remember correctly it was writen after a breakdown i had. It kind of summed up how i felt at the time.