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    Alone

    I look around
    Surrounded by four walls
    With a one way door
    No was of getting out
    Only some people
    They stay for ages
    I watch them die
    Sorrow fills my soul
    I look around
    Searching for something
    Anything to help
    Kill the pain
    I feel deep down
    Walking around
    Going crazy slowly
    Something is also here
    I feel it in my bones
    Trying to tell me something
    Looking over the room
    I notice something
    A pillow and a blanket
    I go over and hide my self
    Trying to get read of the pain
    Make it stop
    Suddenly
    Everything stops
    It all fades away
    Then I wake up
    I felt that before
    Like everything left me
    The feeling is so familiar
    I felt last night
    And the night before
    For the past 6 months
    I felt it so many times
    Trapped in a cycle
    I can't get free
    Then
    As I lower my head
    I look at the floor
    To me lying there
    Still, not moving at all
    But I look different
    My skin is a different colour
    But i am wrapped
    In the Blanket thats old
    A sinking feeling fills me
    I realize I'm alone
    No one to talk to
    Left her to die
    Until another day arrives.

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    Sorry its a long one but i felt it was best to present in this way.

    Please comment about it!!
    Last edited by Sazzy; May 01, 2006 at 01:06 PM.
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    Re: Alone

    I really like it! It's kinda like a story...a sad story. A few spelling mistakes but it's still really good!

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: Alone

    Obviously, with the mispells, i guessed u typed this long one directly, haha...good work..

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Alone

    apparently there was only a few mistakes.

    If i remember correctly it was writen after a breakdown i had. It kind of summed up how i felt at the time.
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