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Alone,
Lost in the crowd,
A heavenly tone,
Draws me from the shroud,
Perpetual darkness,
Brightens on decending light,
Burning away mans malice,
Only to fade leaving eternal night.
The music is a guide,
Leading into redemption,
An escape from the chide,
Chides of people who cause temptation.
Make way to the tones,
The tones of sweet redemption,
Only to find the bones,
Of former temptation.
Cry in the despair of loneliness,
Know you'll always be alone,
Cast into perpetual darkness,
No more of redemptions tone.
Note: that was a poem that I did about 3 years ago. I just stumbled across it in my room and thought I'd put it on here. But I still like my "Not Enough" poem better.
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
I don't know what you are talking about this is really good keep it up
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
Thank you. I appreciate that.
Do you write any of your own?
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
WOW!! Great description... I couldnt hav described loneliness and isolation any better. Its depresssing... but thats the way I love life to be potrayed as... Wooo scary me!!, lol. ^_^
Keep it up.
Do you listen to lots of music and have lots of time to think about your life? If so, that's what I understand in what you wrote. No matter the meaning, you did well to make things rhyme, but in my case, what matters most in the meaingAnd I think there is quite some bit of meaing in this. Nice three year old work you got there.
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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Wow. Thanks everyone. Didn't think it was that good.
Three years old or not, it still pretty acurately describes
my loneliness and isolation today. ^^ Thanks for the
comments.
You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.
wow that was really good I think you need a *pat on the back* keep it up
Thank you soooo much equinn for leting me us this pic of your!!!!!
This is a cute little clip:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PrZQIayUnbA
My favorite song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8frvSHvlzSM
ummm no but I do have a poem but I think everyone is going to laugh
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
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