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    Re: Alone

    ? <Doesnt get what this thread is about>
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    Re: Alone

    Um...we're in the fanfics and poems section.
    I just posted a poem and people are posting
    comments on the poem. Do you get it now?
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    Re: Alone

    that is probably a much better description of loneliness i have ever seen!!

    I really do love this poem!!
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    Re: Alone

    As others have already said, a well-written poem you got there! The word choice is great, it rhymes beautifully at times, and the flow is smooth. All in all, a simply great poem!!! Keep up the work. And, please share more of your works. Thank you.

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    Re: Alone

    wow-----> first reaction
    although im dun kinda get everything....wat?! im onli 14 ...
    the overall one is clear...lonliness....very nc flow though...9/10 o.O

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    Re: Alone

    Wow. I've never gotten this much praise
    for my work. Not even in class (teachers think
    that I'm creepy). This has made me smile,
    which is a rare thing. Thanks for the comments.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    Re: Alone

    ...wow... I don't know why but that was an extremly soothing poem. As I read it I felt like I was being swept away. And that's rare for me. Amazing. Please, write more.

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    Re: Alone

    *Smile grows larger.* Swept away? Well,
    that is awesome. I guess that it's really
    not bad for a three-year-old piece of
    work. Thanks for the comment.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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